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Heavenly line

August 31, 2010

Here’s my response to Three Word Wednesday’s prompt to make a poem including the words abstain, halo, and prayer.

Heavenly line

Crouched in prayer
layered in vestments
designed to draw
the form devoid
of intimate curves
the eyes
(to abstain)
still follow
a line
from daubed human halo

and continue

(from action)
the body bulge

in gentle repose.

2 Comments leave one →
  1. September 1, 2010 05:36

    Loved it Laz…you are so clever!! x

  2. November 1, 2010 21:08

    Jingle Poetry Monday Potluck:

    Welcome Linking in any poem, join the fun today!

    keep writing.

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